I love this story, thank you for writing it! If its alright with you, we recommended it on our last of recommended twine games on this site. I can give you a link to it if you'd like ^_^
Ah! I'm so happy this was uploaded! I've been following the tumblr for the past few days now!
It's a bit short for me to give proper feedback, but having something to play was nice!
I have noticed two small "maybe issues":
I believe Lorcan's name was mentionned for the first time (in the narration) before he actually told his name to the MC. Not sure anymore - I didn't recheck.
When the MC goes to see Gray, it says "and it isn’t long before you find yourself ducking under the low doorframe." - my MC is very short, so I don't know if he'd have to duck?
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is there a reason behind the lack of save features?
This is a masterpiece, I hope it isn’t abandoned ;-;
but is there a reason why gray and robin are non binary, and we do need a save option.
I like this! Hope you continue
I love this story, thank you for writing it! If its alright with you, we recommended it on our last of recommended twine games on this site. I can give you a link to it if you'd like ^_^
I love this!! Keep it up<3
Ooh, the cliffhanger >>
I can't wait for more- the plot and characters were so intriguing!
Oh I like it! I see it has potential and I'm so excited for your next update.
Ah! I'm so happy this was uploaded! I've been following the tumblr for the past few days now!
It's a bit short for me to give proper feedback, but having something to play was nice!
I have noticed two small "maybe issues":
I believe Lorcan's name was mentionned for the first time (in the narration) before he actually told his name to the MC. Not sure anymore - I didn't recheck.
When the MC goes to see Gray, it says "and it isn’t long before you find yourself ducking under the low doorframe." - my MC is very short, so I don't know if he'd have to duck?
That aside well... I'm mostly eager to see more!